Monday, December 17, 2018

Why Turiwhate is special to me


Turiwhate is special to me because most of my relatives are really close so we can visit anytime . Another thing that's cool about Turiwhate is that mount Tracy is named after my relatives.One good thing about it is that we have the Taramakau river next to us so when it's hot we can hop in the river.

Tuesday, December 11, 2018

Amazing story


“Look! Look down there!” His voice could just about be heard above the sound of the aeroplane’s engine and the shrieking wind in their ears.
“Can you see it?”
Under them a bird flew past.As they looked down to see a little Island
“I think thats chicken nugget Island”
“What did you say?”
“I said I think thatsz chicken nugget Island!”
“I see it”
He leaned over a bit more it looks like he might fall then all of a sudden he slips and falls he makes a wild grab for the wing of the plane and completely misses when he fall he pulls the red cord to make his parachute go out but the only thing that comes out is beer cans I guess we get that for paying five dollars to go on the plane and another five for the parachute he thought the guy looked a bit shady no time for that now he has to save his friend  he dives then he realised that he isn't wearing a parachute.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”

“That's another screaming now

Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Flying down the luge

We where learning to write one moment in time

Flying Down the Luge


I was exhausted as I flew
threw the tunnel on the luge
and came out the other side of it.


All around there is snow.
All I can see is snow it's like a
sheet of white.I look down at my legs there
covered in snow some of it
already melting. Snow is
blowing against my eyes I can’t look at the
concrete road.


I am as cold as a peguen. My hands
are turning blue im shaking so bad I can
barely hold the handlebars.
I can’t feel my hands.
I can taste the freezing snow
somehow it blew into my mouth
that I can’t remember opening.
My arms actually hurt.


As I went around the corner
and flew over the finish line
I went to a speeding stop.

The Luge


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Wednesday, August 22, 2018

MY BEST DESCRIPTIVE WRITING EVER!!!


Leafs were scattered all around.
The branches rough like the shell of a turtle.
I hear The creak of the trees.
I stroad to the lake the sunshine bouncing of it.
The smell of the  nice sent from the daisies.
A nice sky blue bird sings a perfect song.
I glance at the black bark of a great oak it’s the size of a dinosaur.

Monday, August 6, 2018

NEW AND IMPROVED!!!!!! Description review August 2018

I enjoyed writing this. It was easy to describe the girl.

She feels the wind grabbing her hair and letting it go again. Surprised and wonder are in her head. Her heart is pounding like thunder. She tastes the cold air. She is frozen like a statue. Big eyes staring in wonder. She hears creaking. She smells pollen out of the dandelions. She zigzags over to the new tree house. With a green roof and wood walls it looks camouflage . Wood chips are on the ground. A brown rope ladder was hanging from the tree house I climb up.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018

descriptive writing

We are learning to write descriptive writing


I  hear a crack.It's the other guys
neck my tackle was to high.
I hear the  crowd is going roaring
ooooh I feel sweat the bulldogs fans
are yelling at me but it seems so distant.
Most of my emotion bubbles above the
surface I see the tri line and the goal post.