Wednesday, June 27, 2018

imaginary planet plan

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Overview (introduction)
Keywords
Crazy,foods,living creatures
Topic sentence
My planet is  really funny
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
  • Food are mostly candy
  • Living creatures in my planet are funny
  • Some crazy things happen on my planet




Concluding sentence
Hope you like my planet and its wierd differences to earth

food
Keywords
Candy, chocolate cupcake, squishy lollipop,colored drinks,tacos
Topic sentence
On my planet we have crazy food
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)

  • Colored drinks only!
  • Squishy lollipops trees
  • Giant chocolate cupcakes
  • Gigantic tacos



Concluding sentence
Hope you like my crazy food on my planet






















Living Creatures
Keywords
Chocolate fish, mushroom cow, chocolate troll, chocolate dragon, chocolate dog
Topic sentence
On my planet there are a lots of creatures
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
  • Mushroom cows give us strawberry milk and they look like mushrooms but with meter legs and and fat heads and they have mushrooms growing on them
  • Chocolate fish eat chocolate and swim in hot chocolate lake they look exactly like chocolate fish that you buy in the shop but they wiggle and there slippery
Chocolate dragons blow hot caramel chocolate  and they look like chocolate




Concluding sentence
On my planet there are some weird creature,








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