Monday, August 28, 2017

Marae

5 comments:

  1. Hi there my name is Luseane and i am a student in room 3 at Wesley Primary School.I really like how you made a slideshow.It made me think of a book i read not long ago called at the marae.Have you thought about adding a bit more detail.If you would like to see my learning, My blog is http://wpsluseanem.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Luseane My name is Lehi and i'm from Pt England and is a year seven and i really like how you made a slide show about your marae trip and loved how you exsplaned what you didi when you got there and how lond you where there for also when you leff and also I was wondering if you could tell us what was you favorite thing there?( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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  3. Kia ora. My name is Zack and I go to Pt England Intermediate. It was really interesting reading your presentation about your school going to a Marea. I think you need to work on giving more information to the readers. I hope to see more from you and your school from Zack

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  4. Thank you for telling me that now I will writ more interesting thing thank you for the fed back ill will put fed back on your blog.

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  5. Thanks Lehi my favorite thing was when we got to go down to the river and look for green stone.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.