Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:

At Kumara School on rainy days we need more devices to go on because it is boring.

Firstly chromebooks are a good idea because it is a educational.

Secondly chromebooks are a good idea because we can do google slides.

Lastly you can type up something if you want to no it chromebooks look up interesting facts

I would really appreciate  if we could go on chromebooks a good idea because it's educational and you can look up learning and use google slides.