Tuesday, March 27, 2018

My moment in time writing

We have been learning to describe a moment in time
My goal is to put speech marks in my writing

Click! Dad turns on the light and then dad opens the curtains
i'm so annoyed. I say “five more minutes”
dad says get up!
I protest by saying but it's still dark

he says “it is always dark” so “get up!”
dad said  so I roll out of bed it hurts but It wakes me up.
I look out the window
I see the outline of trees and the dog kennel.
Sometimes It's so dark I can see my reflection.

1 comment:

  1. she must have trained a lot and that is a lot of medals keep it up good job


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