NEW AND IMPROVED!!!!!! Description review August 2018

I enjoyed writing this. It was easy to describe the girl.

She feels the wind grabbing her hair and letting it go again. Surprised and wonder are in her head. Her heart is pounding like thunder. She tastes the cold air. She is frozen like a statue. Big eyes staring in wonder. She hears creaking. She smells pollen out of the dandelions. She zigzags over to the new tree house. With a green roof and wood walls it looks camouflage . Wood chips are on the ground. A brown rope ladder was hanging from the tree house I climb up.

descriptive writing

We are learning to write descriptive writing

I  hear a crack.It's the other guys
neck my tackle was to high.
I hear the  crowd is going roaring
ooooh I feel sweat the bulldogs fans
are yelling at me but it seems so distant.
Most of my emotion bubbles above the
surface I see the tri line and the goal post.

Math how many hundreds and tens

Tens in 467 =46

Hundreds in 743=7

Hundreds in 7123= 71

Hundreds in 71416= 714

Neil Armstrong voyage

imaginary planet plan

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Overview (introduction)
Keywords	Crazy,foods,living creatures
Topic sentence	My planet is  really funny
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)	Food are mostly candy Living creatures in my planet are funny Some crazy things happen on my planet
Concluding sentence	Hope you like my planet and its wierd differences to earth

food
Keywords	Candy, chocolate cupcake, squishy lollipop,colored drinks,tacos
Topic sentence	On my planet we have crazy food
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)	Colored drinks only! Squishy lollipops trees Giant chocolate cupcakes Gigantic tacos
Concluding sentence	Hope you like my crazy food on my planet

Living Creatures
Keywords	Chocolate fish, mushroom cow, chocolate troll, chocolate dragon, chocolate dog
Topic sentence	On my planet there are a lots of creatures
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)	Mushroom cows give us strawberry milk and they look like mushrooms but with meter legs and and fat heads and they have mushrooms growing on them Chocolate fish eat chocolate and swim in hot chocolate lake they look exactly like chocolate fish that you buy in the shop but they wiggle and there slippery Chocolate dragons blow hot caramel chocolate  and they look like chocolate
Concluding sentence	On my planet there are some weird creature,

mars community

My plan for a new planet

This is my first plan for my information report about a new planet.